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In the beginning...

In the beginning was the word,
but sometimes words are useless,
in isolation, in despair,
when they cannot be heard.

In the beginning was the word,
before it only silence,
the great eternity of peace
was followed up by violence.
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Bible
John 1:1
second revision




second part written by :iconexistence-is-futile:
if you like this, you must like her version too (coz they're the same :D) - [link]

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:iconexistence-is-futile:
in the beginning was the word,
before it only silence -
followed up with violence.


You annoy me sometimes - you always manage to get me writing random shit xD

:aww:

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O_O//O_< *twitch*
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sweet
random shit is good, it's the stuff that dreams are made upon :D
:iconexistence-is-futile:
But then again...I suppose you do make me laugh ¬_¬...
It's true ^^ as usual.

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O_O//O_< *twitch*
:iconexistence-is-futile:
You know what - I love the way you do that. You have a great knack for turning mundane words into pictures ^^
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O_O//O_< *twitch*
:iconkazulistico:
I like your poetry, I feel it like abstract but impersonal feelings

Reminds me of a song, the japanese version of Voices from Macross Plus:
Song: [link]
Lyrics: [link]
:iconensinodanna:
awesome-I think I can feel the same as your poetry.
by the way,good rime
:iconsoundinkmusic:
Great work, especially with the second stanza - the rhyme ties it all up nicely in a short little burst of sounds and images.

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